- The library copy’s narrator was far too excited. I know she’s American, but there are limits. I had to go over to the Librivox recording (all Librivox recordings are in the public domain—).
- Per the Introduction, Baum has some interesting notions about children’s education being moral, for the first time in history, and on how he himsels if going to eschew morals in fantasy, for the first time in history. It’s really sad that he doesn’t have seem to have access to: history. Chicago had no library, I guess. (It’s not fully his fault: everyone says dumb shit when trying to opine about the state of kid lit. It is a sure provoker of Bad Takes.)
Baum also believes he’s not going to say anything too grim or scary in this series. Good luck with that.
- The tone of the dialogue and narration and the use of crying are at times reminiscent of chivalric romance. I wonder if that’s what Baum read before writing this? Some of my frustrations with the book changed shape when I started to think of it was a late entry into that genre rather than a George MacDonald competitor.
- These quest companions truly do nothing but demonstrate the qualities they claim not to have. I know that’s the whole conceit, but this lion is out here every day like ‘eh, let death come’.
- Baum isn’t that interested in dialogue, which is surprising in a novel that’s essentially character based.
- Oz presents himself in several guises, comfortably assuming different genders. This is interesting to note in re Ozma, later.
- A fairy tale reading instinct almost led me to believe that the slightly different wording of the contracts the party members made with the wizard might be important. Ultimately, it wasn’t.
- Wicked witch: *sends flock of evil crows*
Scarecrow: Honestly I’m shocked my skillset is going to come into play, but okay—
- I did not anticipate the flying monkeys being freelance contract employees who got out of there right after accomplishing their errand. ‘That’s the third task done, so we will never see you again, witch. Byeee.’
Absolute Teamsters energy.
‘This kid has the mark of the other witch, so we won't be touching her. We'll just drop her at your house.’
‘Could you just—’
‘No.'
- It’s interesting to have two big plot scenes of emancipation (from the two wicked witches) written when actual Emancipation was still very much in living memory. (Wizard of Oz came out in 1900.) On several occasions the book also described limited states of compulsion, like a fairy tale obligation to do favours, or being caught and forced to be a kitchen maid, as slavery. I suppose that’s not outright, technically wrong. Nevertheless, it’s demonstrative of a surprising readiness to evoke, or fixation on, the concept, which might be unique to the US in that period.
- Oz: Okay, you got me, I see it’s time to show you my amazing puppetry set up—
Dorothy: Isn’t this beast the spider from The Ocean at the End of the Lane production?
Oz: Saving on props, yeah.
- En route to find Glinda and beg a boon of her, the squad discovers a Great Wall literally made of china. The inhabitants and land beyond are all made of porcelain. The quest party hurts them just by existing in their land. Removing the people from the china country to put them on mantelpieces, as Dorothy proposes to one inhabitant, freezes their limbs and entombs them in living death. The lion destroyed a china church by accident as they left. This is a weirdly insistent, striking moment of imperial commentary. Not that Baum was necessarily trying to evoke that—it’s just that those preoccupations fairly inescapably haunt this section.
- Killing the giant spider while it’s asleep is a still-cowardly move, but no one calls the lion on it, so whatever, I guess.
- Right before entering Glinda’s domain, the squad is confronted with the fire gang from Labyrinth. Forced to chilly down.
- Book!Glinda is a redhead who employs seemingly exclusively female soldiers. Good for her.
- The Tin Man has entirely forgotten that chick he wanted to marry. Come on, dude. That was your whole motivation?
- Glinda and the narrative eventually emancipate the winged monkeys, which is good because that was somewhat uncomfortable.
- The silver shoes (also DBA ruby slippers) are more like proper seven-league boots in the book.
- The changes they made for the film are interesting, and honestly by and large good for both the medium shift and the creation of a tight, emotionally effective narrative. I think for arc reasons, they were right to skip almost everything after Oz’s premature evacuation. Yet in part I probably think this because the film is so iconic, and I know it well.
- This was fine, but I was at no point left thinking, ‘if only there were 14 additional books of this series, not counting authorised sequels!’